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Post by Lowen Quicksilver on 4th March 2016, 9:16 pm

There are just little writings I do when I'm bored, hope you like them Smile

Nightmare houses watch in pieces-
-Burn up machine a walking disease unafraid and down again-
-Rabbits at the gates, Lead to doomsday phantoms-
-Rip the seal and notice the pain in your nightmare-
-possessed fanatics plea the feverish ignorant cannot see-
-invite delusion in a mortuary, overturn, man of steel introvert-
-from desert ice raining glass-
-shake me in your object grasp-
-Dressed in red thus it's beating heart-
-Blank is your reaction to the siege-
-all views unaware again rebuild the central brain-
Precious fulfillment through the way,chant remembrance.. only flesh is decay
Indicate, transcend, interpret on divine fertile ground.Original, inventive and of eternal wisdom.
survival. at hand sudden shock, they see and tempt the revealing cause
-Be it monomaniac disturbing relaying hell itself, holding, ticking look inside-
-fallen character forever gone hope for truth now burning flowers-
whispering, the fall morning color stranger than licking faces.
-Your head deranged in a vision, stone ashes-
-announce your death avoid decay, pestilence change with groans a bloodshot thinking brain-
-words misused. does it matter? a cry to break down the blood flow through icy shells, the day of indecision singe my face-

what do you guys think?
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Post by JerriLeah7 on 5th March 2016, 3:01 pm

Wonderful diction! ^^

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Post by Lowen Quicksilver on 5th March 2016, 7:59 pm

not sure yet what I can use them for. ???
any suggestions?
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Post by RadioTanuki on 8th March 2016, 12:08 pm

Nice! Grin Maybe write a book of short story poems? You could always make a doom and gloom fortune teller character for a role play too, if you wanted another way to use them here. Am I wrong in thinking this poem is about a person dealing with the end of the world or maybe a metaphor for depression?

Hey, you could write songs too. Poems translate great to songs.

If all else fails, just keep posting them here. At least you will have an audience for them somewhere. There are plenty of other places you could post them as well, like DeviantArt and stuff!

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Post by Lowen Quicksilver on 8th March 2016, 6:04 pm

they are meant for the reader to interpret for themselves Smile I would like to get them published in a book someday if I can. Smile
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